Hello Huzifa Thank you so much for sharing your presentation on how to make a paper plane, It was easy to read and had clear instructions and pictures to show each individual step.
Keep up the great work and perhaps next time you could tell us how far your plane flew.
Hi Huzaifa,
ReplyDeleteI am so proud of your learning.
I can see that you are trying very hard.
Keep up your hard work. Ka pai.
Mrs.Southcombe.
Hello Huzifa
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing your presentation on how to make a paper plane, It was easy to read and had clear instructions and pictures to show each individual step.
Keep up the great work and perhaps next time you could tell us how far your plane flew.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora Huzaifa,
DeleteI really like the effort and work you put into your instructions. You were clear and added pictures - this will make it easier for your reader.
I noticed you used the word now to start your sentences. This is a great "time" word. I wonder if you can use other time words?
Looking forward to future blog posts,
Miss Laxa
Kia ora Huzaifa
ReplyDeleteI really liked it that you putted the instructions of how to make a paper plane in your blog so everyone will know how to use a paper plane.